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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Usually I am not visiting a park very often. One of the reasons is that we don't have any in my village. There is no need to have some, because when we want to see some piece of nature, we used to go in the forest. But on the other side nearby there is a huge park in the city. I like to go there with my friends when I finish my school. You can find there four tennis courts. When it the weather is not very bad and when it is enough warm we go to play tennis there. It is really nice when you look around and see only many huge trees.
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  • jeromiee
    Mochapoints: 3221  |  Teacher Score: 1557 (47%)

    your good but some how your missing in some sentenceswhen it the weather this line in your sentence means nothing.. your grammar is not right in that sentence you have to remove it before the then the sentsnce will give correct meaning.and the 2nd line has no grammar one of the reasons is that is when it comes the adjective must always be singular you have to change reasons into reason if reasons come means is should become are . are is used for plural... check out on it the next time well done & all the best  

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