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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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Most popular holiday in Russia is 9th May. We have celebrated recently. It lasts 3 days
The 9th of May is "Day of a victory". This day in different cities pass meetings of veterans of an «antihitler» coalition. In Russia veterans meet at "a monument to the no-name soldier" (Monument of Unknown Soldier)
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  • eyeguy777
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    Hi Nataliya;

    This is well done.  There are small changes to make:

    The most popular holiday in Russia is 9th of May ( or May 9th), which we have celebrated recently. It lasts 3 days.  The 9th of May is "Day of a victory". On this day in different cities pass meetings of veterans of an «antihitler» coalition. In Russia veterans meet at "a monument to the no-name soldier" (Monument of Unknown Soldier)
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  • Paul
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    good job
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