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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

Raphael Oliveir...'s submission: Average Rating:
I'm going to Vancouver, I like sports and I going to learn about snow sports and ice sports. Becaus of travel I need to improve my english.
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  • Bárbara Pirtous...
    Mochapoints: 320  |  Teacher Score: 76 (0%)

    Weel done just don't forget that:

    - I AM going to learn

    - BeacusE

    - como "travel" que vocês está usando é uma cosa específica (sua viagem para Vancouver) você precisa usar um artigo "THE": because of THE travel
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  • malena
    Mochapoints: 4069  |  Teacher Score: 2834 (100%)

    I like sports and i´m going to learn about snow sports and ice sports. Because i´m going to travel i need to improve my english.
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  • Reyna Lagunas
    Mochapoints: 3807  |  Teacher Score: 1154 (0%)

    Good job but take care in I am going to......
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