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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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when ı decide to go to a park;
ı prefer to be alone cause before going there,ı always walk a little,then in order to take a rest and read a book or daily newspaper ı pass into the park.
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    "when ı decide to go to a park; I prefer to be alone because before going there,I always walk a little. After that I like to take a rest and read a book or daily newspaper that I picked up on my way into the park."

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