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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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I am a student and english teacher, I'm not a police. You are a doctor and she is a secretary. The man is an enginer, he isn't a president.
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  • -Jᴏɴ-
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    I am a student and an English teacher; I'm not a policeman. You are a doctor and she is a secretary. The man is an engineer; he isn't a president.

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  • Mark K. Bilbo
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    I am a student and English teacher, I'm not a police officer. You are a doctor and she is a secretary. The man is an engineer, he isn't a president.

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    "a president" could be confusing here, particularly in the US. "President" by itself is understood to mean the country's President. You may want to word this as:

    "The man is an engineer, he isn't president of the company."

    Or something like that.

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