Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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My last vacation was in Egypt, on the Red Sea town called Marsa Alam. I stayed in a tourist village to the seaside with a big coral reef. I dived to see amazing fishes, from the smaller to big one. I also went on ancient Egypt ruins. It was a breathless experience.
I suggest to all people to went there and have a journey to Luxor and to cross the Nile river by boat.
I suggest to all people to went there and have a journey to Luxor and to cross the Nile river by boat.
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My last vacation was in Egypt to the Red Sea in a town called Marsa Alam.
I suggest to all people to ( go) there etc......
Good!
Thank you L for this and all others comments!!!
Very good! Keep practicing!
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My last vacation was in Egypt, to the Red Sea in a town called Marsa Alam. I stayed in a tourist village by the seaside close to a big coral reef. I dived to see amazing fishes, from the smaller to big ones. I also went to visit the ancient Egyptian ruins. It was a breathtaking experience. I suggest to all people everyone who goes there to take a quick journey to Luxor and to cross the Nile river by boat.
My last vacation was in Egypt, on to the Red Sea in a town called Marsa Alam. I stayed in a tourist village to by the seaside with a big coral reef. I dived to see amazing fishes, from the smaller to big ones. I also went on to visit the ancient Egyptian ruins. It was a breathlesstaking experience. I would suggest that to all people everybody to went goes there, and have take a journey to Luxor and to cross the Nile river by boat.
Very nice~!
Just remember, we say to go not to went. I know that was just a slip right there. Keep it up~!