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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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I live in Italy. It's a country in the middle of Mediterranean Sea, bordered by Alps mountains on north. On north-west it border on France, on North with Swiss and Austria and with Croatia on north-east. There are two main islands: Sicily and Sardinia.
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  • L*
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    Hello flymirco!

    well done!

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    Very good.

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    "I live in Italy. It's a country in the middle of Mediterranean Sea, bordered by Alps mountains to the north. In the north-west it shares a border with France, in the North with Switzerland and Austria and with Croatia in the north-east. There are two main islands: Sicily and Sardinia."

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    Great job! Very good!

    [...] It's a country in the middle of the Mediterranean Sea,[...]

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    I live in Italy. It's a country in the middle of Mediterranean Sea, bordered by Alps mountain chain on to the north. OIn north-west it has a border on with France, on in the nNorth with Swiss and Austria and in the north-east with Croatia on north-east. There are two main islands: Sicily and Sardinia.

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