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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Well ! On my desk there is Personal Computer, a telephone set, a pen stand, a note pad, a bell, a calculator and punching machine and a bottle of water along with a cup to drink water. My desk has three drawers. In the First drawer I hold things that I will need in the coming morning like important papers. In second one I hold papers the decision of which I have to take in 2-3 days and in third one I hold my old papers which is of not so important till now but may be come in use in coming one month. after one month I usually destroy all papers in my third drawer.
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  • Sivananthini
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    Excellent. and so methodical !
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  • schoolmarm
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    On my desk there is a personal computer, a telephone, a pen stand, a note pad, a bell, a calculator, a paper punch, a bottle of water, and a cup with which to drink the water. My desk has three drawers. In the first drawer, I keep things (items) that I will need the next (following) morning like (such as) important papers. In the second one, I keep papers that require a decision and action within two or three days. In the third drawer, I keep old papers that are not important now, but that may be of use in the coming month. After one month, I usually destroy all the papers in my third drawer. Anyone would understand what you have written. There are only a few mistakes, mainly capitals when you don't need them and the word "which." Use which if, when you add "by the way," the sentence still makes sense: "along with a cup (by the way) with which to drink." Otherwise, use "that." In other words, use "which" when your sentence will still say what you want it to even if you do not add the phrase with "which" in it. Use "that" when you are being very specific and the words that come after it are needed for the sentence to say what you mean and to make sense. The words I put in parentheses are more sophisticated substitutes for the ones you wrote, but your words are correct as well. I hope this helps! Good job! I wish my French was half as good as your English! Claudia
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    to explain every thing is right but as per the sentences quality of sentences has low power.
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  • Sally Moore
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    Well ! On my desk there is personal computer, a telephone set, a pen stand, a note pad, a bell, a calculator and punching machine and a bottle of water along with a cup to drink water. My desk has three drawers. In the first drawer I hold things that I will need in the coming morning like important papers. In the second one I hold papers the decision of which I have to take in 2-3 days, and in the third one I hold my old papers which is of are not so important till now but may be come in use in the coming one month. After one month I usually destroy all papers in my third drawer.

    Nice work. I left a few small suggestions. Again, you could be understood before any corrections, but this will help with your grammar. Keep going!  \o/
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