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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I spent my last holidy in Guabgzhou,it's mmore then about 150km from my home and it took 60RMb to get there.
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  • nono
    Mochapoints: 5286  |  Teacher Score: 1284 (100%)
    Try again, You should answer the question! Don't repeat it.
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  • gerson
    Mochapoints: 1136  |  Teacher Score: 175 (0%)
    Hi! I´m brazilian and I´m learning English too. Let me try to help you. I thing it`s better to say: I spent my last holiday in.... instead of "I spent my holiday in... last time". If you are talking about the past, "it will take" must be changed by "it took". I hope I gotta help you! Bye! Gerson
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