English Writing Exercise

Describing Objects and their Locations

Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

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Silmara
The man is on the red table.He is not in the brown couch.The boy is on the blue bed.He is not in the couch.The woman is on the green chair.She is not in the red box.
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Submitted: 2010-02-08 17:01:15




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  • 2009-06-19 03:13:49
    OCTony
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    The man is on the red table.  - good

     

    He is not in on the brown couch.  - use on and not in. In is used for being inside of something like - he is in his car or the food is in the refrigerator.

     

    The boy is on the blue bed. - good

     

    He is not in on the couch.  - See my above comment.

     

    The woman is on the green chair.  - Good

    She is not in on the red box. use on if something sitting on something.

     

    Good effort! Keep up your good effort.

     

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  • 2009-06-19 06:06:42
    MAHIPAL
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    good

    he is not on the brown couch

    the woman is not on the red box. 

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  • 2009-06-19 10:10:19
    Nina
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    Very good! :-)

    The man is on the red table.He is not on the brown couch.

    The boy is on the blue bed.He is not on the couch.

    The woman is on the green chair. She is not in the red box.

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  • 2009-06-19 19:23:45
    steve
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    perfect, very well done.

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  • 2010-01-22 18:04:00
    esteban

    in = ligado.

    on = dentro do.

    Muito bom. Continue praticando!!

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  • 2010-02-08 17:01:15
    Graham
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    The man is on the red table. He is not in the brown couch. The boy is on the blue bed. He is not in on the couch. The woman is on the green chair. She is not in the red box.

    Leave a space between sentences.

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