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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit this site http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sevastopol and
http://foto.sevastopol.info/eindex.html
Sevastopol is on the coast of peninsula Crimea .
There are many landmarks and parks there.
I recommend to visit Balaclava Bay, where is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was Greek city in 529/528 BC. Swallow’s Nest is one of landmarks also. It is a monument of architecture and located on the rock above the Black See.

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  • CharlieR
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    Very Good!

    ........Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula. There are many landmarks and parks there. I recommend a visit to Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view, and Chersonesus, which was a Greek city between 528 and 529 B.C. Swallow's Nest is also one of an interesting landmark. It is a monument of architecture and is located on a rock above the Black Sea.

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  • Gilgy
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    If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit [visiting] this site

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  • Athlete61
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    Svita,

    As always, wonderful work. Watch the spelling and articles.

    1. ... I recommend that you visit this site...

    2. ... on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.

    3. ... I recommend that you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view.... OR... , which has a very nice view

    4. The Swallow's Nest is...

    5. It is an architectural monument... Black Sea.

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  • TomM
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    I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to you visit this site...

    Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.

    I recommend to  you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was a Greek city in 529/528 BC.

    Swallow’s Nest is one of the landmarks also.]

    It is a monument of architecture and located on the a rock above the Black See.

     

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