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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

Vanessa's submission: Average Rating:
Esta flores sao laranja.Nao sao amarelas.
*The flowers are orange.Are not yellow.
Os homens estao conversando.Nao estao gritando.
*The men are talking.Not yelling.
A menina caiu.Mas nao machucou.
*The girl fell.But not hurt.
Este menino tem cabelos curtos.Eles nao sao compridos.
*This boy has short hair.They are not long.
A mulher comeu tudo.Mas nao sentiu-se muito bem.
*The woman ate everything.But he was not very well.

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  • ketancmodi
    Mochapoints: 15706  |  Teacher Score: 186 (0%)

    please write in english.

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  • Mar
    Mochapoints: 102352  |  Teacher Score: 86276 (100%)

    corrections of the English sentences:

    The flowers are orange, they are not yellow.

    The men are talking, not yelling.

    The girl fell but was not hurt.

    This boy has short hair, it is not long.  ( hair is treated as a singular..his hair IS short.  But if you are talking about indvidual hairs then you could say...There are three hairs on your shirt.)

    The woman ate everything, but SHE was not very well.

    Good work!

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  • ahmed khairy
    Mochapoints: 2552  |  Teacher Score: 493 (0%)

    sorry i'm learning english only

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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