What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5
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The woman who has red long hair is talking on the phone. The handsome man is driving his silver car to the airport. The pretty girl is playing the piano in her living room. The smart boy is playing some games on the computer which is on his table. You are cooking for dinner in the bright and clean kitchen. I am doing my homework in my quiet study.
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The woman who has long red hair is talking on the phone. The handsome man is driving his silver car to the airport. The pretty girl is playing the piano in her living room. The smart boy is playing some games on the computer which is on his table. You are cooking for dinner in the bright and clean kitchen. I am doing my homework in my quiet study.
Excellent.
Excellent ...... long red hair.
Perfect! Perhaps better as 'long red hair'
You are cooking for dinner in the bright and clean kitchen.
long red hair will work better.
The smart boy is playing some games on the computer, which is on his table.
You are cooking dinner in the bright and clean kitchen.