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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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I went shopping a month ago.I bought a pair of shoes.It cost me 399 yuan.
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  • Senext Lasser
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    pretty good!

    But you should write more...
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  • Debbie
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    I went shopping a month ago and I bought a pair of shoes. It cost me 399 yuan.

    Very good but I will advice you to write more.
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  • Baby_Strong
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    great work you did everything ask of you

    well done
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  • Darren
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    Very good!
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  • Rick
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    Perfect!  I should mention that we generally put a space after each period.
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  • toko
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    excellent but as others have commented, try to write more..it will helpful in ur learning..
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  • Kevin MH
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    I went shopping a month ago and bought a pair of shoes. It was 399 yuan.
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