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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today is rainning and cold. She needs a umbrella. Tomorrow will be sunny but cold. I'll need a sunglasses. Yesterday was sunny and hot. I needed my camera to take photos. Today is hot and cold. I need to stay in my bed. If tomorrow will be cold, I go to my house with my jacket.
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  • -Jᴏɴ-
    Mochapoints: 267320  |  Teacher Score: 260577 (100%)

    Today it is raining and cold. She needs an umbrella. Tomorrow will be sunny but cold. I'll need a sunglasses. Yesterday was sunny and hot. I needed my camera to take photos. Today is hot and cold. I need to stay in my bed. If tomorrow will be cold, I will go to my house with my jacket.

    Good!

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  • Mark K. Bilbo
    Mochapoints: 16798  |  Teacher Score: 8844 (100%)

    Today is raining  and cold. She needs a umbrella. Tomorrow will be sunny but cold. I'll need sunglasses. Yesterday was sunny and hot. I needed my camera to take photos. Today is hot and cold. I need to stay in my bed. If tomorrow is cold, I will go to my house with my jacket.

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    "I'll need a sunglasses."

    The word "sunglasses" is treated as plural even though there's only one on your face. Don't know why, English just does. To talk about one, you can add "pair of" such as:

    "I'll need a pair of sunglasses."

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    "Today is hot and cold."

    Both? Really?

     

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