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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I'm a little woman, only 5 feet 10. I have short and highlighted hair, Slightly waved. Like the most of natural asian, my eyes are chocolate.
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  • Anthony Thompso...
    Mochapoints: 6326  |  Teacher Score: 5969 (0%)

    I'm a little woman; I'm only 5 feet 10. I have short, wavy, and highlighted hair.  Slightly waved. Like the most of natural  most Asians, my eyes are chocolate brown like chocolate.

    Nice writing.  Keep practicing.

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  • Maureen Smith
    Mochapoints: 12604  |  Teacher Score: 10226 (100%)

    I'm a little woman, only 5 feet 10.  (this is all Mim?) I have short and highlighted hair. It is S slightly waved. WAVY.  Like the most of the natural asian, Asians my eyes are chocolate BROW.

    5' 10" in my opinion is tall Mim?

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  • mim
    Mochapoints: 4340  |  Teacher Score: 2475 (0%)

    thank you for all.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • chanel
    Mochapoints: 2528  |  Teacher Score: 1285 (100%)

    I'm a little woman, only 5 feet 10 inches. I have a short,slightly wavy highlighted hair. Like most Asians my eyes are brown just like chocolate.

     

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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