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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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The lasty time I went shopping was two hours ago. I went some food shopping. I went to the near supermarket and bought some fruit and vegetables, milk, my favourite youghurt, a loaf of bread, some eggs and meat.
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  • echo
    Mochapoints: 13467  |  Teacher Score: 1773 (97%)

    The lasty last time I went shopping was two hours ago. I went to do some food shopping. I went to the near supermarket and bought some fruit and vegetables, milk, my favourite youghurt  yogurt ,a loaf of bread, some eggs and meat.

    It's a good job on the whole, but pay attention to some words and grammar. Good luck to you.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Richie
    Mochapoints: 18718  |  Teacher Score: 7709 (100%)

    The lasty time I went shopping was two hours ago. I went some food shopping. I went to the near nearby supermarket and bought some fruits, and vegetables, milk, my favourite yogurt, a loaf of bread, some eggs and meat.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • alhakhtar
    Mochapoints: 10102  |  Teacher Score: 9877

    .....I went to do some food shopping in a nearby supermarket ..(there are three I went in two sentances do not repeat the words)...

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