Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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Well... I went in a shopping in the last month and I bought some colthes and acessories for me in some shops there. Well...I like buy but I have a good sense and so I dont spend much, my shoppings was cheap because I never spend more that I have.
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well...I went for shopping last month , I bought some clothes and some accessories for me from some shops. I like shopping( to buy things) but I have good sense so I don't spend much , things that i bought were cheap because i never spend more than I have.
Well... I went in to a shopping in the last month and I bought some colthes and accessories for me in some shops there. Well...I like to buy but I have a good sense and so I dont didn't spend much, . My shoppings was were cheap because I never spend more that than what I have. ;)
Hi, Mary!
Although presenting some minor mistakes, your text perfectly conveys the message.
It's always worth reviewing our texts right after we write them. By doing so, we avoid these slips!
Cíntia
i don't my shoppings were
I very much agree with the others...
You have good suggestions already offered.
1. Well...I went in a shopping in the last month and I bought some clothes and accessories for me myself in some shops there.
Make sure you use the reflexive form of the personal pronoun when using a preposition in the reflexive sense. for myself, for herself, for himself.
2. Well...I like to buy but I have a good sense and so I don't spend much. My purchases were cheap because I never spend more than I have.
Either "I like to buy" or "I like buying"
Just a couple things here and there but overall good job!
Good!