Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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Humm...well my last vacation I stayed in my city. I enjoy to study more and read more books, or walk more in some parks of city to rest. I recommend for other vacations that dont matter the place, but enjoy the maximun with your family and enjoy to rest your mind too. Bye- bye!
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well, I spent my last vacation in my city . I enjoy studying more and reading more books , or walking in some parks of the city for taking rest . my advice for other vacationers not to give importance for the place, but enjoy the maximum time with your family and rest your mind .
( recommend means to tell vacationers about the places that they should visit
for example: I recommend spain for other vacationers.
so in your passage its better to say i advice vacationers
to study an read morebooks
Humm...For last vacation I stayed in my city. I enjoy to studying more and reading more booksor walking more in some city parks of city to rest. I recommend that for other vacations that don't the location does not matter the place, but I suggest enjoying the maximum time with your family and enjoy using it to rest your mind, too. Bye- bye! ;
I hope these changes make sense. Let me know if they do not. \o/
Very good to understand but you have to know i am not native english but i have written like i would do it
Humm...My last vacation I stayed in my city. I enjoy studying, reading more books or walking in our city parks to take a rest. The location doesn't matter but I like to enjoy the most of the time with your family and with your mind, too. Bye- bye! ;
Very good! Just: 'I enjoy studying and to read more books or to walk more in some of the parks in the city to take a rest.' and 'I recommend for other vacations where the place doesn't matter, just to enjoy the maximum time with your family and to enjoy resting your mind too.' ;-)