How many objects?
Instructions:
Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5
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My little sister has one hundred fourteen shoes pair (pairs of shoes, i dont know... im confuse.. :-S haha help me ) and I have five shoes pair but its more cool.
I had long vacations... two month and fourteen days but now im going to university again, is very tired because I need wake up very very early 5:00 am. :( aaaaaarrrrgggghhh I hate that!!! but is nice when I stay with my friends... : D very funny!!!!!!
bye :)
I had long vacations... two month and fourteen days but now im going to university again, is very tired because I need wake up very very early 5:00 am. :( aaaaaarrrrgggghhh I hate that!!! but is nice when I stay with my friends... : D very funny!!!!!!
bye :)
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Good work Celin. The pronoun 'I' must always be capitalized.
I'm not sure what the last sentence means. (D very funny .. what is 'D'?)
My little sister has one hundred and fourteen pairs of shoes. pair (I dont know... im I'm confused.. :-S haha help me ) and I have five pairs of shoes, pair but its they are more cooler. I had a long vacations of two months and fourteen days but now im I'm going to university again. is I am very tired because I need to wake up very, very early at 5:00 am. ( aaaaaarrrrgggghhh I hate that!!! but it is nice when I stay with my friends... : D very funny!!!!!! bye.)
Jacquie got the corrections right. Keep up the good work!
My little sister has one hundred fourteen pairs of shoes, and I have five pairs of shoes. (Yes, it is "pairs of shoes." WOW! That's a lot!!)
I am not sure what you mean by "but its more cool." Maybe you mean . . . . Mine are cooler. OR My shoes are cooler.
I had a long vacation (two months and fourteen days,) but now I'm going to university again.
I am very tired because I woke up very early, 5:00 a.m.
Aaaaarrrggghhh I hate that, but it is nice being with my friends.
Good writing! Keep practicing!