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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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Yesterday I went to shopping center with my mother. I wanted to buy some popular songs of DVD. My mother wanted to buy some fresh fruits, vegetables, chicken, and fish. Finally we bought all things we wanted to buy.
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  • lucpla
    Mochapoints: 21845  |  Teacher Score: 15881 (98%)

    "went to the shopping center"

    "popular songs on DVD"

    Better to say" we bought all the things.."

    Excellent.
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  • Soheil
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    good nice
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  • Jack Lee
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    Diana, good work -

    I went to the shopping center...

    we bought all the things...
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  • Eddy
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    Fabulous Diana!!!

    Yesterday I went to a shopping center with my mother. I wanted to buy some popular songs of on DVD. My mother wanted to buy some fresh fruits, vegetables, chicken, and fish. Finally we bought all the things we wanted to buy.
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  • El águila
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    Not bad, but you have a couple of mistakes.

    Yesterday, I went to the shopping center with my mother. I wanted to buy some popular songs of a DVD. My mother wanted to buy some fresh fruits, vegetables, chicken, and fish. Finally, we bought all of the things we wanted to buy.
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  • Mike
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    Yesterday I went to (the) shopping center(,) with my mother. I wanted to buy some popular songs (on) (of) DVD. My mother wanted to buy some fresh fruits, vegetables, chicken, and fish. Finally(,) we bought all (the) things we wanted to buy.
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  • GB Fred
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    Yesterday I went to _the shopping center with my mother. I wanted to buy some popular songs on_ DVD. My mother wanted to buy some fresh fruit_, vegetables, chicken, and fish. Finally we bought {everything = all _the things} [that] we wanted to buy.

    ( Different metals_ are used in making a car made of metal._)
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