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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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An heavy elephant is lying on a clean place.
This baby sleeps quiet in the small bed.
That cream is cold .
The large Hall is cold because of air-conditional.
This food is expensive.
that car is cheap.
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  • Arvonius
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    heavy elephant is lying on a clean place. This baby sleeps quietly in the small bed. That cream is cold . The large Hall is cold because of the air-conditioning. This food is expensive, and that car is cheap.

    A very good effort, hanxwlove. Well done!

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  • Jenny 제니 珍妮 ジ...
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    An heavy elephant is lying on a clean place. This baby sleeps quietly in his cot. That cream is cold. The large Hall is cold because of air-conditioning. This food is expensive. That car is cheap.

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