Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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My nice vocation
It will be a nice holiday for me in this year . My friends and I have planed our journey in Yangjiang ,which will last five days between June twenty-first and june twenty-fifth. there is beautiful beach and ocean in Yangjiang. It's real a nice place for visiting , we can swim in
sea every day , enjoy the shower of sunshine on the beach . Also , we
can eat delicious tropic food and fruits .
I can't wait for getting there !
It will be a nice holiday for me in this year . My friends and I have planed our journey in Yangjiang ,which will last five days between June twenty-first and june twenty-fifth. there is beautiful beach and ocean in Yangjiang. It's real a nice place for visiting , we can swim in
sea every day , enjoy the shower of sunshine on the beach . Also , we
can eat delicious tropic food and fruits .
I can't wait for getting there !
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in this year应该改为this year
real应为really
can't wait for这里的for貌似应该改为to
别的不太确定，就不说了。
很不赖，我就很懒，只写了一点
in this year应该改为this year
real应为really
can't wait for这里的for貌似应该改为to
别的不太确定，就不说了。
很不赖，我就很懒，只写了一点