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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

DORA LUZ JAIME's submission: Average Rating:
I enjoyed my recent holiday in Phoenix, Arizona, E.U.A. Is a very beatiful place. Is 500 Km. from my city and the cost of bus ticket is $40.00 dollars.
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  • Polly
    Mochapoints: 3575  |  Teacher Score: 1749 (0%)

    Corrections - Arizona, U.S.A.

                        - It is a very.............

                        - It is 500Km............    Well done Dora.
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  • Lais
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    Eu gostei das minhas férias recentes em Phoenis, Arizona-EUA. É um lugar muito bonito. Fica a 500 km da minha cidade eo custo da passagem de ônibus é de R $ 40,00.
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