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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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In vacation I went an island near to my country by airplane. Its name is San Andres Island in front this there is other small island, its name is Jhonny Kay. I went there by ship.
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  • kol46
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    On vacation I went to an Island near my Country by plane. Close to it there is an other small island which name is Jhonny Kay.

    Voce esta indo bem!

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  • rahlovely
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    u already got the advice... practice more.

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  • Cormac Holmes
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    For my vacation, I went by plane to an island near  my country . Its name is San Andres Island and, in front of it, there is other small island called Jhonny Kay. I went there by ship.

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  • Carlos Roche
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    On my vacation (holiday) I went by airplane to an island called San Andres. It is near to my country. There is another small island close by, its name is Jhonny Kay. I went there by ship.

    Well done!!!

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  • Kevin MH
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    I went to an island near my country while on vacation. I took an airplane to get there. It's called San Andres Island. In front of it, there is another small island called Jhonny Kay. I took a ship to get there.

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