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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.

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a women is watching tv.a man is listening to music.a girl is dacing.a boy is walking.you are eating ice cream.i am playing computer games.
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  • demi
    Mochapoints: 6176  |  Teacher Score: 462 (0%)

    good

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Caroline
    Mochapoints: 2836  |  Teacher Score: 494

    dancing~

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  • notonlyart
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    Please note that the first letter of each new sentence has to be in CAPITAL letters...

    A woman is watching TV. A man is listening to music. A girl is dancing. A boy is walking. You are eating ice cream. I am playing computer games.

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  • Joy
    Mochapoints: 144  |  Teacher Score: 28 (0%)

    dancing拼写错误,你这个阶段,拼写问题是一定要注意的。然后没有大的语法问题,注意,首字母一定要大写。还有一个量词问题。you are eating an ice cream.在单数名词前一般都要用量词!!!

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