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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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Yesterday I went to the cinema in the evening. I worked at my office all the time.In the evening I played football.
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  • Karashemshek
    Mochapoints: 3667  |  Teacher Score: 3262 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 3667  |  Teacher Score: 3262 (0%)
    Somkidth Looks good-- Yesterday evening, I went to the cinema. By putting yesterday before evening you can leave out in the. Your sentence is good. I worked at my office all day. I would use all day and not all the time. In the evening, I played football. Did you play football and go to the cinema on the same evening? You make me think that you did so. Karashemshek
    Submitted over a year ago
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