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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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Today is Sunday, the fourth of May. İt is last day of the week.
I don't like Sunday because it will be Monday and it is a work day.
(Σήμερα είναι Κυριακή, το τέταρτο του Μαΐου. Είναι τελευταία ημέρα της εβδομάδας.)

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    good job....
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    ευχαριστώ....
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    ;) Good - take care ;)
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    ........τέσσερις Μαίου. Είναι Η τελευταία ημέρα της εβδομάδας. Μράβο σου!
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    Μπράβο!*
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  • Xuxao
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    hahaha.. very nice, Nerminfgr, but I think you're out of the context of the exercise. You were supposed to do something like this. >> Today is sunday. The woman is going to buy flowers in the morning, to give her mother a present. The boy is gonna play soccer with his friends in the afternoon... << etc. but I really liked your point of view.. great grammar, vocabulary and sense in your prhrases... only one observation: Sunday is the FIRST day of the week. (I guess)... congratulations... keep on studying more and more. o/
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    They way you have written it sounds that The Sunday is the fourth sunday of the May, did you mean that or did you like to say its the Sunday and date is the 4th May? I dont like Sundays coz the next day you gotta do work. Sounds good or not?
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