Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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My last vacation was 2006. I was in Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them. We were in Miami, Palm Beach and we visited a concert.
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My last vacation was on 2006. I was in Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them. We were in Miami, Palm Beach and we visited a concert.
GOOD job! .....................we went to a concert.
My last vacation was in 2006. I went to Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them.( who is them?) While we were in Miami, Palm Beach, we went to a concert.