Directions to your house
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, provide directions for a guest from the nearest bus stop to your house. Which direction should your guest go? Where should he turn? What will he see on his way to your house? How will he recognize your house?
I studied in JiMei University and I graduated last year. My Universtiy is in Xiamen City of Fujian Province and It has been built for 91 years. I studied at Nevigation College of my University and my major is International Shipping Management.
Every year, there are so many sailors and shipping business graduates from my college. They are going to work in ships and land operations. Sometimes, some students whose major is navigation technology change their major into flying plane, become a polit rather than a salior.
My college provide China Polar Regin Research Center many graduates, they are so excellent as a captain or chief mates that the Research Center given my college a stone that was exploited from south pole as a present. It said that it was 2 ton heavy and has been five hundred million years old.
There are very many mango trees in my college. It ripe at the end of June, the fruit tasted delicious.
My college is a school with long history, I like it, so is my major.
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English Writing Exercise 
I studied in JiMei University and I graduated last year. My University is in Xiamen City of Fujian Province and It was built 91 years ago. I studied at the Navigation College of my University and my major is International Shipping Management. Every year, there are so many sailors and shipping business graduates from my college. They are going to work in ships and land operations. Sometimes, some students whose major is navigation technology change their major into flying a plane, become a pilot rather than a salior. My college provides China Polar Region Research Centre many graduates, they are so excellent as a captain or chief mates that the Research Center gave my college a stone that was brought from the South Pole as a present. It is said that it is 2 tons heavy and is been five hundred million years old. There are very many mango trees in my college. They are ripe at the end of June, the fruit tastes delicious. My college is a school with a long history, I like it, so it is my major. Excellent work, all my corrections are minor ones only. Best wishes for an interesting career.
ni hao, You did pretty good. There are just a few grammar mistakes but your friend below has already mentioned this. Nice job!