English Writing Exercise

Daily Activities

Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7 A.M. I leave my house for work at 8 A.M. I go to sleep after 11 P.M.

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murat
My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. The Turkish doner is made from meat. İtis ok.
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Submitted: 2009-07-16 06:43:11




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  • 2008-05-05 20:39:45
    Ashley
    This is really good! I just have two suggestions - you might want to combine the second and third sentences - "I like it so much because it is really tasty and good." And the last sentence should be "It is ok." But that might have just been a typo, if so just ignore this comment.
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  • 2008-05-06 03:02:45
    Saifu
    Beautiful
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  • 2008-05-06 03:02:45
    Saifu
    Beautiful
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  • 2008-05-06 06:39:17
    Jenny
    good. ;p
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  • 2008-05-08 06:11:10
    jj
    1. My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. Perfect! In USA English, favourite = favorite. You use the British spelling of the word. 2. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. = I like it so much because it is really tasty and good. (Because is a conjunction, or a word that connects thoughts and sentences.) Thank you for writing about this. It sounds very good. I had not heard the word "Doner" before. We grill meat on spits, especially in the summer, in the United States.
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  • 2008-05-08 15:36:41
    Shirkutza
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  • 2008-05-16 20:47:50
    Kathy0215
    My favorite meal is a turkish doner. I liek it so much because it is really tasty and good. The turkish doner is made from meat , it is ok.
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  • 2008-05-30 02:15:10
    一切随缘
    very good
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  • 2009-07-16 06:43:10
    Kanyanush

    good !!~

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