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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

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My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. The Turkish doner is made from meat. İtis ok.
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  • Ashley
    Mochapoints: 2293  |  Teacher Score: 322 (100%)
    This is really good! I just have two suggestions - you might want to combine the second and third sentences - "I like it so much because it is really tasty and good." And the last sentence should be "It is ok." But that might have just been a typo, if so just ignore this comment.
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  • Saifu
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    Beautiful
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  • Saifu
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    Beautiful
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  • Jenny
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    good. ;p
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  • jj
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    1. My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. Perfect! In USA English, favourite = favorite. You use the British spelling of the word. 2. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. = I like it so much because it is really tasty and good. (Because is a conjunction, or a word that connects thoughts and sentences.) Thank you for writing about this. It sounds very good. I had not heard the word "Doner" before. We grill meat on spits, especially in the summer, in the United States.
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  • Shirkutza
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  • Kathy0215
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    My favorite meal is a turkish doner. I liek it so much because it is really tasty and good. The turkish doner is made from meat , it is ok.
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  • 一切随缘
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    very good
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  • Kanyanush
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    good !!~
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