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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

mirela's submission: Average Rating:
I like to walk at the park. To admire nature and animals. To listen the song of the birds. I like the fresh air and sports into the park is nice too. The only sport i do into the park is jogging. In my native city there is the second natural park of Europe. It is like a point of reference for my city and a nice place to meat friends and relax.
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  • Kaclau
    Mochapoints: 4434  |  Teacher Score: 395 (100%)

    I like to walk at the park. To admire nature and (the) animals. To listen (to) the song of the birds  birds singing. I like the fresh air and (playing) sports into in the park is (also) nice too. The only sport I do into in the park is jogging. In my native city there is the second natural park of europe The second (largest?) natural park in Europe is in my native city. Its like a point of reference for my city and a nice place to meat meet friends and relax.

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  • MOHAMMAD
    Mochapoints: 6520  |  Teacher Score: 662

    to listen to the song.

    it's so quiet to listen or i like to listen to the birds, or and to listen to the birds.

    I like the fresh air and making or doing sports or to make or to do sports into the park is nice too.

    the only sport i have been doing into the park is jogging.

    in my native city, you mean in your country.

    last, to meet friends, otherwise to eat meat.

    do you want to eat your friends.

    ciao

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  • AnikinMW
    Mochapoints: 118283  |  Teacher Score: 23456 (92%)

    I like to walk in the park; to admire nature and animals; to listen to the birds sing. I like the fresh air, and sports in the park is nice, too. The only sport I do in the park is jogging. In my native city there is Europe's second natural park. It is like a point of reference for my city and a nice place to meet friends and to relax.

    Cheers :)

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  • skr21
    Mochapoints: 5415  |  Teacher Score: 602 (0%)

    good

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  • Mann
    Mochapoints: 1157  |  Teacher Score: 536 (100%)

    with reference to Anikin, there is no need to add something from my side.

     

    wonderful!!!!

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  • sukdew
    Mochapoints: 10970  |  Teacher Score: 6988 (99%)

    Very good. Corrections are already given.

     

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