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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

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I like to eat well, and usually I eat salads, fish, chicken, cereals, milk. In a ordinary day i eat at breakfast: milk with cereals and maybe eggs and chees; At lunch i eat chicken with salad, or fish with salad. At dinner we prepare different meals like: pasta or tortellini, or beans, or peas. Sometimes i eat calf meat with potatoes. I never eat bread, or fries or fats...... i like milk fatless or low-fat yougurts.
I eat fruits every day...and my opinion is that a healthy body has a helthy mind too:)
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  • Kindness
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    I like to eat well, and usually I eat salads, fish, chicken, cereals, and milk. In an ordinary day, I eat, at breakfast, things like: milk with cereals and maybe eggs and cheese; At lunch, I eat chicken with salad, or fish with salad. At dinner, we prepare different meals like: pasta or tortellini, or beans, or peas. Sometimes I eat calf meat with potatoes. I never eat bread, or fries or fats. I like fatless milk or low-fat yogurt. I eat fruits every day...and my opinion is that a healthy body has a healthy mind too:)

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    cheese,yogurt, fatless you mean half skimmed.

    good!!

    eat well and sleep well for good health.

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    cheese,yogurt, fatless you mean half skimmed.

    good!!

    eat well and sleep well for good health.

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    cheese,yogurt, fatless you mean half skimmed.

    good!!

    eat well and sleep well for good health.

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    cheese,yogurt, fatless you mean half skimmed.

    good!!

    eat well and sleep well for good health.

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    cheese,yogurt, fatless you mean half skimmed.

    good!!

    eat well and sleep well for good health.

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  • AnikinMW
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    I like to eat well, and usually I eat salads, fish, chicken, and cereals, and I drink milk. On an ordinary day I eat these at/for breakfast: milk with cereals and maybe eggs and cheese. At/For lunch I eat chicken with salad, or fish with salad. At/For dinner we prepare different meals such as: pasta or tortellini, and beans, or peas. Sometimes I eat calf meat with potatoes. I never eat bread, or fries, or fats. I like fat-free milk or low-fat yoghurts. I eat fruits every day, and my opinion is that a healthy body has a healthy mind, too :)

    Cheers :)

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  • skr21
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    good

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  • neon
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    Very good work!

    Look at the review by 'Kindness'. His review is the best one, and I can't add to his corrections.

    Keep studying :)

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  • Mann
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    Normal days I take milk......at breakfast.

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    very Good openion. 

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  • sukdew
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    Cool! Nothing to add.

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