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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

Nishant Patil's submission: Average Rating:
Last time I went to LOOT shop for jeans. I purchase one spyker jeans which cost me Rs.1800, after get out of that show I search two three shop for shirt buy didn't like any of them. Lastly I went to Jeans Junction shop, I liked many of the shirts which sales boy showed but lastly I purchased only one which I like most that cost me Rs. 1200.
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  • steveinaz
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    Very good!

    Last time I went to LOOT to shop for jeans. I purchased one Spyker jeans which cost me Rs.1800, after get out of that show I searched (looked) in two or three shops for a shirt buy didn't like any of them. Lastly, I went to Jeans Junction shop, I liked many of the shirts which the sales boy showed me but lastly I purchased only the one which I liked most that cost me Rs. 1200.

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  • juliana
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    i agree with steveinaz

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  • hiflyer87
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    I agree with steveinaz comments, good work!

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  • kiwi
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    Last time I went to buy some jeans I went to Loot.  I purchased one pair of Spyker Jeans which cost me Rs.1800.  After leaving that shop I looked in two or three shops for a shirt but I didn't find any that I liked. Lastly I went to the Jeans Junction shop and I liked many of the shirts there that the sales boy showed me.  Finally I bought the one which I liked the most and that cost me Rs.1200.

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