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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

Nishant Patil's submission: Average Rating:
On my last vacation I went to Water Kingdom located in Mumbai, just one and half hours journey from my house. It is said to be Asia's largest theme water park with world's biggest wave pool(actually saying wave pool is not a big attraction), heart stopping rides and slides, DJ Music, river adventure cruises, place for laze around and relax. People from the different age group come to take a break from everyday tension and have fun.

Water Kingdom is open from 11 am and 7 pm, on all days. You can easily reach there by road, taking the Western Express Highway. For foreigner, they can get direct taxi from Airport it's just 1 hour journey from there.
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  • steveinaz
    Mochapoints: 69651  |  Teacher Score: 62514

    Very good!

    It is said to be Asia's largest theme water park with the world's biggest (largest) wave pool(actually saying wave pool is not a big attraction), heart stopping rides and slides, DJ Music, river adventure cruises, a place for laze around and relax. People from the different age groups come to take a break from everyday tension and have fun. Water Kingdom is open from 11 am and 7 pm, on all every days. You can easily reach it there by road, taking the Western Express Highway. For foreigner, they can get a direct taxi from Airport it's just 1 hour journey from there. It's worth the visit.
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  • juliana
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    what a good job Nishant...take a look to your mistakes...i agree with steveinaz
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