My occupation
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
One of the holidays of Vietnam that is the Vietnamese Southern Liberation. It is April 30th. It was over 42 days. We celebrate the day every year to remember the magnanimous past. We won at the war to control our country. Nowadays, we are developing our country and welcome the tourist to discovery the historical hallmark.
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English Writing Exercise 
One of the holidays in Vietnam is the Vietnamese Southern Liberation Day. It is on April 30th. It lasted 42 days. (next sentence OK). We won at the war to gain control our country. Nowadays, we are developing our country and welcome tourists to discover the historical hallmarks.
Cindy, I agree with brioche's comments.
One of the holidays of Vietnam that is the Vietnamese Southern Liberation. It is April 30th. It was over [lasted] 42 days. We celebrate the day every year to remember the magnanimous past. We won at the war to control our country. Nowadays, we are developing our country and welcome the tourist[s] to discovery the historical hallmark [landmarks]. (Not sure whether you mean 'landmarks,' but 'hallmarks' isn't the appropriate word).
It was over 42 days. I dont understand what that means.
Very good! I see all the corrections. Have a nice day!!! :D