Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The woman does have long hair, she not has short hair.
The man does have black hair. He not has white hair.
The girl does have blonde hair. She not has shirt hair.
The man does have black hair. He not has white hair.
The girl does have blonde hair. She not has shirt hair.
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It's ok. I would write it like this:
The woman has long hair, she does not have short hair. The man has black hair. He does not have white hair. The girl has blonde hair. She does not have short hair.
With the negative you want to say "does not" and with positive you only need to say "has"
Good job. I agree with harleyp: we usually only use 'does have' for emphasis, like when trying to inform or convince someone who has doubts.
The woman has a long hair. She does not have a short hair. The man has a black hair. He does not have a white hair. The girl has a blonde hair. She does not have a short hair.