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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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Bun Bo Hue is a popular meal in Hue.
The ingredients are rice vermicelli, pig's feet, stewing beef, pork pies, raw vegetables...
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  • Kevin
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    Cindy, your practice is paying off.  Maybe stewing beef should be stewed beef?  I'm not much of a cook, so I'm not sure if it's the same.

    Wikipedia has a good entry on the ellipsis (...) if you'd like to see more about it.

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  • catalpa
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    Well done Cindy, no mistakes. A good comment from Kevin but in Ireland we would also say " Stewing beef", that is the beauty of languages even in english there are differences.

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