Staying at a Hotel
Instructions:
Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.
I have visited more than 5 countries but there was no business visit or a vacation visit. However these all visits were for study and training purpose. During my training at a world-renowned technical institute situated in Singapore, I stayed in Hotel Sheraton
,but I did not took break fast in the bed because in my opinion bed is only for sleep.
Normally I like to dine in dining area because there we can see a lot of different peoples to learn new things like culture etc therefore I never used room service in foreign hotels.
Of course now a days world is available on computers so I used computer facility in hotel.
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English Writing Exercise 
I have visited more than 5 countries but there was neither a business visit or a vacation trip. However, all these visits were for the purpose of study and training. During my training at a world-renowned technical institute situated in Singapore, I stayed in the Hotel Sheraton, but I did not take breakfast in bed because in my opinion bed is only for sleeping. Normally I like to dine in a dining area, because there we can see a lot of different people. We can learn new things like culture, etc., therefore I have never used room service in foreign hotels. Of course, nowadays, the world is available on computers, so I used the computer facility in the hotel.
This is very good work, Qaiser. You have the right ideas! Please study all of the changes, including those where I have placed punctuation marks = commas, periods and spaces.
good job. read Arnonius' comment carefully.
Hi your work is very good but you have mistakes. I agree with Arvonius.
I'm totally agree with the first comment
Thanks to all friends especially Mr.Arvonius.
With Love
yours
Qaiser
but they were NEITHER for business NOR pleasure.( a vacation)
.ALL THESE visits were for. (that order ..all these is proper.) Or even better ....ALL OF THESE...
training PURPOSES ...in THE Hotel....I did not TAKE breakfast in bed. ( you do not need to use an article there) ....opinion THE bed is...( here you need the article)
..in THE dining areas because there we can see a lot of different people ( no s) and learn new things from them, like their culture etc.
so I do use the computer.... or so I USE
You made a good effort here.
bonjour Quaiser,
J' aimerai bien pouvoir vous aider mais mon Anglais est insuffisant.
Bien à vous ,Amanda
good sir, excellent, but you have some mistakes.i m agree with Arvonius.
My friend Qaiser! Since its a long time I don´t review your jobs, I am glad to see how you have improved. Please continue so, practising.
Best wishes for a great life!
Your friend, Nancy
as whole world is changing around and change is aprt of life,so i think a person should change according to the situation.