English Writing Exercise Describe the location of your city and country
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.
Hello Angela ;)
Hello comunity Livemocha. My name is Angela. I`m from Colombia and live in Bogota the capital. I`m learning a new languages ( a language - singular)and enhancing my knowledge of English, because I think it is necessary to know more than one language and it allows us to engage in personal and business relationships around the world.
Very good! I´ve changed the order of one of Your sentences so it sounds better.
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Lo reescribo
Hello Limemocha comunity .My name is Angela. I`m from Colombia and I live in Bogota, the capital. I`m learning a new languages and enhancing my knowledge of English, because I think to know more than one language today is a necessity ( or because I think it is necessary to know more than one language nowadays ) as ( ya que) it allows us to engage in personal and business relationships around the world.
nowadays = hoy en día, actualmente ( actually quiere decir de hecho ¡cuidado!)
Hello, community Livemocha. My name is Angela. I'm from Colombia and live in Bogota, the capital of the country. I'm learning a new languages and enhancing (improving) my knowledge of English. That is because I think that knowing more than one language is a must(a necessity)nowadays. And this knowledge allows us to engage in personal and business relationships around the world.
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I live in Bogota, the capital of Colombia.
Así es mejor.
Buen trabajo ...sigue adelante!
Hello Livemocha community. My name is Angela. I'm from Colombia and I live in Bogota, which is the capital of Colombia. I'm learning new languages and improving my knowledge of English because I think it's necessary to know more than one lanugauge these days. It allows us to engage in personal and business relationships around the world.
Angela, great job! You already know the corrections. Have a nice day!