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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is 16th of July and very hot weather today. Raining is expected in next 2 days. There was raining 3 days back. Tomorrow weather will be same as today, very hot.
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  • FreeWorld
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    Good.

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    Today is 16th, July and very hot weather today. Raining is expected in next 2 days. There was raining before 3 days. Tomorrow weather will be same as today, very hot.

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  • Aggie
    Mochapoints: 1687  |  Teacher Score: 667 (99%)

    Good1

    Use 'today' only once in a sentence. Today is 16th of July and it is very hot.

    A rain is expected.

    It was raining 3 days ago. Or it has been raining for 3 days now.

    Tomorrow's weather will be the same as today's. 

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  • Mallory0720
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    today is the 16th of July and the weather is very hot today. Rain is expected the next two days. It was raining 3 days ago. Tommorrow's weather will be the same as today; very hot.

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