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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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Taiwan has a popular drink id "Pearl milk tea". The ingredients are milk tea and "pearl", which makes a pearl shaked by flour.
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  • councilof1
    Mochapoints: 122  |  Teacher Score: 22 (0%)

    Hi Fiona,

     

    A couple of issues here.  "id"; i'm not sure what this means.  I have a feeling it should be replaced by "called"?  Good job on emphasizing "pearl"!  the last part should be in a different tense.  For example, "The ingredients are milk, tea, and "pearl", which is made with shaken flour".  Something like this?  Overall, great attempt though!
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