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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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My favorite city is İstanbul. The city that is to the north of İstanbul is Black sea, to the south is Bursa, to the east is Adapazarı and to the west is Tekirdağ"

Αγαπημένη μου πόλη Istanbul. Η πόλη που είναι προς τα βόρεια της Istanbul είναι Μαύρη θάλασσα, προς τα νότια είναι Προύσας, προς τα ανατολικά είναι Adapazarı και προς τα δυτικά είναι Τεκιρντάγκ "
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    First, I went to supermarket with my parents in Istanbul last year. Then, I said clerk "I want to buy CDs. Can you help me". He said me "Here you are. CDs is over there. Next, I looked at CDs there. Last, I bought a box of CDs.
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    .. The city is {to the south of / on the southern coast of} the_ Black Sea ..
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