English Writing Exercise
My occupation
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
In my Country there is a popular holiday, it takes place in August.
Its name is " LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is a very pop festival of sounds, singers, songs, music and dancing of ancient folk songs peasants.
It is starting early day of August, in every cities and villages of Salento, county of Lecce, to the south of Italy. And it ends with a great meeting, to Melpignano, where gather about 100,000(yes, one hundred thousands) people, to partecipate in the "LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is very beautyfull....All sounds and coltures of the Mediterranean Sea.
Sorry for my grammar....Thanks...
Its name is " LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is a very pop festival of sounds, singers, songs, music and dancing of ancient folk songs peasants.
It is starting early day of August, in every cities and villages of Salento, county of Lecce, to the south of Italy. And it ends with a great meeting, to Melpignano, where gather about 100,000(yes, one hundred thousands) people, to partecipate in the "LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is very beautyfull....All sounds and coltures of the Mediterranean Sea.
Sorry for my grammar....Thanks...
Submitted: 2009-07-21 00:51:28
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Well done!!!Congratulations ;)
In my country there is a popular holiday, it takes place in August. Its name is " LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is a very pop festival of sounds, singers, songs, music and dancing of ancient folk songs peasants. It is starting starts in the first days of August, in every cities and villages of Salento, county of Lecce, to the south of Italy. And it ends with a great meeting, to Melpignano, where gather about 100,000(yes, one hundred thousands) people, to participate in the "LA NOTTE DELLA TARANTA". It is very beautiful....All sounds and cultures of the Mediterranean Sea. Sorry for my grammar....Thanks...
WE CAN UNDERSTAND , WHAT YOU HAVE WRIITEN, THOUGH THERE ARE MISTAKES. WELCOMEING YOUR INVOLVEMENT, IN DOING THE EXERCISES.GOOD YOU CAN DO BETTER.
WISHES.
1. It is starting starts at the beginning early day of August...
2. ... to in the south of Italy.
3. ... to in Melpignano
4. where gather about 100,000(yes, one hundred thousands) people. IT IS BETTER IF YOU INVERT THE SENTENCE ORDER:" where about one hundred people gather."
5. beautyfull - BEAUTIFUL
6. coltures - CULTURE
GTAXIS,
Great description!! I could understand everything. You are getting better and better! Good job indeed!
I agree with previous reviews. Your good, just do the exercises!