English Writing Exercise
Your last vacation
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
I went to the north of Iran on my last vacation. In fact, I've not been in many places to recommend the best one to spend your vacations. At least I'm going to say, north of Iran is very great and beautiful place to visit and spending vacations.
Submitted: 2009-07-21 01:54:16
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Quite good. I'd rather write: "...to visit and spend". But I'm not sure!
...beautiful place to visit and spending vacations. ->...a beautiful place to visit and to spend a vacation.
very good.
I would rather say I haven't been in many places to recommend the best...
"I haven't" is the preferred contraction for "I have not", but "I've not" is possible. "I've not" would stress the negative "not" more than the alternative, but I'd avoid it in formal writing.
...the north of Iran is a very great and beautiful place to visit and spend vacations.
or, as bakuzen said: to visit and spend a vacation.
I went to the north of Iran on my last vacation. To tell the truth I have not been to that many places in my life, so I couldn't really recommend you the best place to spend your vacation. However, I am going to say this, the north of Iran is a very great and beautiful place to visit and spend your vacation. ..............great job i think this way sounds more native.