A Shopping Trip
Instructions:
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4
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my favourite city is my motherland Taian,we all konw the mountain of Tai
is in the city.it surrounded by Liaocheng ,Jinan,Laiwu,and Jining.
is in the city.it surrounded by Liaocheng ,Jinan,Laiwu,and Jining.
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monazzahMochapoints: 4743 | Teacher Score: 2359 (100%)good keep it up. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
aileenMochapoints: 3183 | Teacher Score: 144 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
aileenMochapoints: 3183 | Teacher Score: 144 (0%)
good Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
kelinMochapoints: 64736 | Teacher Score: 62878 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
kelinMochapoints: 64736 | Teacher Score: 62878 (100%)
Good...Just remember to make the first word of a sentence start with a capital letter. Make 2 spaces after a period and 1 after a comma. Spelling: konw-know Good work... Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
NebilMochapoints: 10776 | Teacher Score: 6985 (100%)My favorite city is my hometown Taian. The mountain Tai is in the city. It is surrounded by Liaocheng, Jinan, Laiwu and Jining. very good!!Don't forget to use a capital letter at the begining of a sentence. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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