English Writing Exercise

A Shopping Trip

Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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wangxi
my favourite city is my motherland Taian,we all konw the mountain of Tai
is in the city.it surrounded by Liaocheng ,Jinan,Laiwu,and Jining.
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Submitted: 2008-08-17 05:03:44




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  • 2008-05-09 09:02:04
    monazzah
    good keep it up.
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  • 2008-05-12 07:07:33
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  • 2008-05-12 07:07:44
    aileen
    good
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  • 2008-05-15 03:13:31
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  • 2008-05-15 03:15:09
    kelin
    Good...Just remember to make the first word of a sentence start with a capital letter. Make 2 spaces after a period and 1 after a comma. Spelling: konw-know Good work...
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  • 2008-08-17 05:03:44
    Nebil
    My favorite city is my hometown Taian. The mountain Tai is in the city. It is surrounded by Liaocheng, Jinan, Laiwu and Jining. very good!!Don't forget to use a capital letter at the begining of a sentence.
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