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Describing Hairstyles

Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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demi
Today is Tuesday, I am worked. On the evening of today, my general manager, my fellow and I are going to shopping. My general manager has a white beard and short black hairt. My fellow does not have long red hairt, but she has short glad hairt.
제출됨: 2008-05-21 19:19:38



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  • 2008-05-09 20:39:45
    ESLBruce
    You can use one of the verbs, but not both. You could have: Tomorrow is Saturday, but I must work. (A native speaker would probably use "have to" instead of "must") OR Tomorrow is Saturday, but I will be working.
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  • 2008-05-10 11:33:43
    Eliz
    Hello Demi! Good try! you may write also in this way 'Tomorrow is Saturday, but I have to go to work.' Keep on the good work. Ciao ciao! Eliz
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  • 2008-05-20 17:51:21
    ESLBruce
    Looks like time expressions are being translated from Chinese . Today is Tuesday, I am WORKING. Tonigh, my general manager, my fellow-worker and I are going to shopping. My general manager has a white beard and short black hair. My fellow does not have long red hair, but she has short black(?) hair. I'm not sure what glad hair (notice there is not a "t' on the end of hair) means. I am guessing that you may have meant black hair, unless you meant a glad heart.
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  • 2008-05-21 19:19:38
    Eliz
    Good Try Demi! Most of the corrections had been done by your friend. Keep on the good work. Cheers Eliz
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