English Writing Exercise
Describe Your Home Tools
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
Today's September 17th, it is Thursday. The weather is slighty sunny but it is hot. Yesterday it was raining, the weather was very bad.
Submitted: 2009-09-19 18:26:14
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Today's Friday, July 24th, and it is a quater to eleven AM, now. It is 40° degrees Celsius and the weather is very hot. Today is the birthday of my friend, Leonardo. This evening we will hold a great party for him at Mario's Bar. There will be almost one hundred guests. We will drink beer, cocktails and sing and dance all night. Tomorrow will be still hot and this weather will prolong till weekend. I think that I'll go to the sea every weekdays for swimming and sunbathing.
sunbathing
It's nice!
trang pham comments all
Very good job and I agree with the comments above!
..all day at the sea..
...and we will sing ...
...we will be at a great...
I agree with Trang.
I think that it would be better to say:
July 24th - because in English we use the ordinal number for date.
Today is my friend´s birthday.
There will be a great party for him/ We´ll hold a party for him...
There will be almost...
Tomorrow it will still be hot/ It will be hot the whole weekend. I think I´ll spend the day at...
But you did a good work, keep studying!!
Very good! Just "tomorrow" is missing.
Very good! Just "tomorrow" is missing.