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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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She is a nurse. She is not a teacher. He is a police officer. He is not a mechanic. I am a engineer. I am not a Chef. You are a bus driver. You are not a student.
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  • NNER
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    "an engineer"

     

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  • molly-51
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    very good

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  • mandee
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    Very good!

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  • babystarlit
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    very good. if you want to try something a little different you can turn you simple sentences into compound ones by adding commas. for example instead of she is a nurse. she is not a teacher. you could say she is a nurse, she is not a teacher.

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