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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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The food is on the table, and the boy is in the box. The books are on the table. The coins are on the box. The wallet is on the table. The money is on the box.
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  • Ning Jian
    Mochapoints: 12245  |  Teacher Score: 7142 (100%)

    good job Carlos, just one small thing:

    The food is on the table, and the boy is in the box.

    don't use ", " with "and", use one or other.

    The food is on the table and the boy is in the box.

    or

    The food is on the table, the boy is in the box.

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